The Widow's Lantern
82,400 words · 26 chapters
A Season of Glass
91,200 words · 30 chapters
The Hollow Estate
78,900 words · 24 chapters
Mist and Mourning
84,700 words · 27 chapters
The Ivory Heir
61,240 / 85,000 words
The Crimson Promise
87,432 words · Active draft
🔴 Critical Issues (2)
In Book 2 (Ch.3), Thomas has "pale blue eyes." In Book 4 (Ch.11), they're described as "dark brown." These are 2 years apart in publication — likely a continuity error.
In Book 4, Ashworth is stated to be 36. In Book 6, set 2 years later, he's described as 38 — which is internally consistent. But the Book 4 text implies he's "not yet 35." These cannot both be true.
🟡 Warnings (3)
Sealed "since 1882" in Book 1. Referenced as "sealed for eight years" in Book 3 (set in 1888, which would be 1880). Small but noticeable to attentive readers.
Evangeline finds three ledgers in Book 1, Ch.8. Books 2 and 3 only ever reference two. Book 6 reintroduces the third. Readers may notice the gap. Consider a single line in Book 4 or 5 acknowledging it.
In Book 3 she leaves to care for a sick sister. In Book 6 she's described as having "left after the incident with the solicitor" (a different reason). Readers of the full series will notice.
🟢 All Clear (8 checks passed)
22 rooms, 3 passages, stable count, chapel location all match.
Brown hair, grey eyes, left-handed — consistent across all appearances.
Inheritance law details match historical record and each other.